What comments have I received that emphasize the strengths in my essay? How can I maintain this type of writing in the future?

   * I have a very “strong voice” when I write, especially when I am arguing a topic that I feel very passionatly about.  What I always try to do is think about the topic and think of some type of catch phrase that would grab someone’s attention and then incorporate that into my paper to catch your eye.

What did I consider the strongest part of my essay? Do the comments reflect this belief? If so, how? If not, what can I do in a revision to make this my strongest point?

   * I definatly bring myself into the paper using what I personally think and then backing it up with some great facts and information that I find.  I always to try to make my first paragraph and conclusion really, really good so that it reassures the reader of my feelings toward the topic and then leaves them contemplating the topic itself and taking my opinion into consideration.

What comments have I received that point out weaknesses in my essay? What do I need to do to begin improving on these essays?

   * I have a tendency to stray from the topic, which was outlined by the reader in this paper.  I need to outline a little better and make sure that I stay on topic.

Could the Write Site help me with these improvements? Why or why not?

   * The write site could definitely help me out with what needs to be improved on my paper.  I have a pretty good relationship with my old high school English teacher who usually edit’s my papers for me because I don’t live in Denton.  I was very much on a time crunch with this paper and none of that got done. 

Do you feel that you could adequately revise this essay and receive a better grade now that you are able to see where the weaknesses in your essay?

   * If I had the oppurtunity to revise this paper make the changes necessary, I could definately rock this paper’s world.